| Drunk Author: |
Wong Lofan |
| Description: |
My wife went to see her sister I got drunk and acted stupid cause I missed ’er.. |
| Location: |
Lompoc, CA 93436 |
| When: |
12/24/2007 11:13:23 PM |
| de comment: |
This poem is outstanding in that it clearly is drunk. No fake drunken poetry here. While interesting and promising, this poet will begin writing great bar poetry when he invests some self and tragedy in the poetry. Bravo on the drunkenness. I suggest you be just as drunk or more drunk for future poems, and, try to give us a look at your personal tragedy as well. |
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| "No-Ma’s Sister" or "Fukien Lofan" |
No-Ma’s Sister
Or
“Fukien Lofan”
No-Ma went to see her sister.
Lofan home alone- ha ha! old hop’s swilling mister.
No-ma went Awol, old Jui Gui is gonna miss her,
He’s sad he never got to saw the sister.
Lofan learned some secret Fukien Karate,
he went then out to look for hotties.
Why did the Lofan do Ms. Nu Wong?
“Now I might just go visit that Mrs. Bong!”
“Think I’ll lay out naked on the green grass,
bare my bald head to the breeze,
Hang my bennie on a branch,
hope the bugs don’t bite my @$$!”.
Ye Gad’s! that Fukien old Lofan had to much to drink,
he’s calling “Ralph” up in the sink!.
Ralph! Ralph! Ralph! Ralph
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| Author, Wong Lofan |
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